Monday, November 2, 2009
Butcher in New York Recalls Over Half Million Pounds of Beef
A New York butcher voluntarily recalled 545,699 pounds of ground beef that could have bacteria in it that could be linked to two recent deaths. The recall went though eight different U.S. States. The bacteria could cause diarrhea, dehydration and kidney failure.
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Nice job with summarizing. It's hard to hear this type of news, but necessary.
ReplyDeleteI read about this too. Minnesota was one of the states that was affected! The beef didn't sound like it was at many places around there though.
ReplyDeleteGrade: 8.5/10
ReplyDelete• states didn't need to be capitalized
• Repetition: Unites States states
• Run-on sentence should have been split up for ease in reading and understanding: New York butcher voluntarily recalled 545,699 pounds of ground beef that could have bacteria in it that could be linked to two recent deaths.