Yesterday morning around 9 o’clock in the morning at the North Point Inn, bookkeeper, Nina Cortez went to work, got robbed and could have been murdered. Nina was in her office counting money, $6,000 in all, and someone came into the office when a knife.
The robber, Nina said, was about 5’ 10” maybe 6 feet, in his early 20’s and has a medium build. He was wearing blue jeans, blue plaid shirt, and blue tennis shoes. He was also wearing a floral scarf that covered up half of his face.
When the robber came into the office Nina started to scream and kick. When she kicked, her chair with wheels slide away from her and she then feel to the ground. After she fell the robber reached over her and took $130 in five dollar bills.
After he left she locked the door after she heard another voice call the robber out. A few minutes later she heard the police outside of her office. When she went outside of her office she saw blood. The blood was from her co-worker Kevin Blohm, a cook, who was lying on the floor with a stab wound in the chest and hand.
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wow. This is revolting. Where did this take place?
ReplyDeleteI really like your work in general, however this one did seem a little long and wordy for me. I think with this you could have condensed it a bit more. I have a really hard time with that too though, I almost wish I could write a whole article!
Was this a newstory or your story three posting? I'm assuming it was your story three posting since there is no online website that tells where you got the news article from.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, I think I would have to agree with Carissa. This story does seems like it could have been condensed a bit more, but for the most part I think you did a great job!
This is very scary! I liked your summary it was very descriptive, but it could've been condensed.
ReplyDeleteGood job!