Sunday, October 4, 2009

New Wild Head Coach Starts Where Old One Started

New Minnesota Wild head coach Todd Richards first game was a lost against the Columbus BlueJackets this Saturday night. Coincidentally the former Wild head coach, Jacques Lemaire ended his career with a win against the Columbus BlueJackets last year. With a new Wild General Manager and head coach it will be a whole new team.
Posted by at

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 4, 2009 at 5:41 PM

    Great job at your summary. Sports is something I'm not usually interested in, but you made the point come across smoothly. Good Job!

    ReplyDelete
  2. TeshaOctober 6, 2009 at 1:03 PM

    grade: 8/10
    Mistakes:
    • Missing possessive "s" on Richard's
    • Not this Saturday night as it is in the past
    • Missing comma after Lemaire to close out phrase
    • Wild General Manager doesn't need to be capitalized without a name to go with it

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)