Isaac Paul Jenson, 20 years old, of Princeton, Minnesota died yesterday around 3:00 p.m. He died from a freak accident playing a game of flag football.
Isaac loved all kinds of sports and did everything he could do to be involved with them. Isaac also enjoyed volunteering at his church's Youth Group. He was a student at Anoka Ramsey Community College with ambitions to go into the sales field.
Visitation will be held on Friday at the United Methodist Church in Princeton, Minneosta at 6p.m. followed. Funeral will follow on Saturday October 14th.
Isaac was survived by his parents Ron and Debbie, sister Hannah, and girlfriend Jenna.
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This was very good. Though I think its kind of creepy writing our own obituaries!
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• Should be Minn. x2
• Should be 3 p.m. (no zeros)
• Should be Saturday, Oct. 14
• Should be 6 p.m. (space between time and p.m.)
• Should be Anoka-Ramsey (hyphen)
• Youth group doesn't need to be capitalized as it isn't a proper name
Justin - You lost several points due to AP Style mistakes. In writing stories in the future, you might want to check out the new link I posted for AP Style. Check the top navigation bar in the D2L page for this class.
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